When Love Arrives Annotated by Mikhaela Brianna Velasquez

Sarah Kay & Phil Kaye - When Love Arrives

This is a spoken-word poetry performance done by Sarah Kay and Phil Kaye. The poem is written by Sarah Kay herself.

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Annotations

00:03 - 00:07

They both recite this verse to emphasize the beginnings for both of them; the pause emphasizes this beginnnng as well

Caesura
Speech

00:08 - 00:10

Pause and high pitch of voice adds to the naiveness that youth believe what love to be, setting the expectations

Caesura
Pitch

00:11 - 00:27

Defines "love" as being a person when used in this poem; personification

Definition

00:34 - 00:35

Said together to emphasize similar expectations to how love would "be like"

Speech

00:44 - 00:46

Said together to mark the timeline of this love story; their first meeting

Speech
Context

00:58 - 01:00

Having the same thoughts of expectations not meeting the fantasy

Speech
Context

01:04 - 01:05

Pause to micmic a teen attempting to lie

Caesura

01:06 - 01:07

Audience laughing as this is a relatable moment for almost everyone

Audience Sounds

01:15 - 01:23

Sarah changing her voice to a low growl tone and Phils heavy nervous breathing is an amazing way to portray nervousness inexplicitly we call this identification in voice: acousmatic voice; Phils adlibs weren't in the lyrics of the poem

Timbre

01:28 - 01:30

Realization that her "love" is no longer in her life

Caesura

01:33 - 01:35

This verse is a relatable and profound feeling many experienced and is quoted most often and is actually how I found this poem

Context

01:44 - 01:46

Said together - when there are versus Sarah and Phil say together it is referencing the notion that they share similar feelings or thoughts

Speech

01:51 - 01:52

Said together but for performance; Phil says "her" with Sarah and emphasizes the sudden moment walking somewhere in the world and seeing someone whom you used to have relations with

Speech

02:03 - 02:06

Pause is portraying the moment of realization Sarah has: she is no longer the only love Phil has had in his life, there were others

Caesura

02:10 - 02:11

Said together; similar thinking, on the same wave length

Speech

02:15 - 02:23

Their voices sound gentle and soft portraying the loss of a past love that may be reigniting now ; "Love" is repeated to emphasize the personification of "love" and his/her habits

Timbre
Speech
Verse Structure

02:30 - 02:37

The speakers voices become increasingly irritable towards eachother with the change of tone portraying the change from admiration to annoyance

Timbre

02:38 - 02:40

The word "boobs" was amplified and longer duration to highlight Sarah's annoyance and emphasize her distaste for Phil's "immaturity"

Amplitude
Speech

02:46 - 02:47

"Love shits!" was amplified for shock value (as it was shocking for the two to know this new information)

Amplitude
Speech

02:48 - 02:49

Laughter from the audience adds to the lightheartedness and relatability many found with the preceding verse

Audience Sounds

02:50 - 02:54

The realization; another point of change within Sarah's point of view

Caesura

02:55 - 02:56

Phil interjects Sarah's line to emphasize how much he "means it"; how much he means when he compliments her beauty

Speech

02:58 - 03:05

repetition to emphasize how important this term is to Sarah to further point at how many rely on their partners validation (even unconciously) on their appearances

Verse Structure
Tempo

03:08 - 03:14

"love thinks.." diverting the audiences expectation from Phil to Sarah; learning to view yourself as beautiful without reliance on your partner, a lesson many can learn from

Caesura

03:18 - 03:23

A concluding verse to this implicit message of loving yourself, a reminder many need once in awhile

Definition

03:30 - 03:32

"India" is not in the official poem script, but was added for the performance to emphasize the unpredictable nature of where and when you may encounter "love"

Context

03:33 - 03:46

Throughout the poem, the versus have similarly repeated beginnings, spoken in the same tempo; These versus begin with a "Maybe"

Tempo

03:53 - 03:57

Their voices slowly begin to sound weaker, vulnerable, tired to portray the exhaustion of fixing something that is already beyond repair (the end of the relationship)

Timbre
Speech

03:58 - 03:59

A pause after this verse highlighting the anguish of love being impermanent; acceptance settling in on both Sarah and Phil; this part of the poem mimics a conversation between the two with one desparate to leave and the other hanging on, begging for them to stay

Duration

04:00 - 04:01

Said together; as both have come to an acceptance that they must end their relationship

Speech

04:10 - 04:13

Said together, allowing themselves to open up to other opportunities and potental partners

Speech

04:23 - 04:27

A concluding verse to end both the poem and relationship; accepting that your expectations of how "love" is supposed to be will not always follow through, and that is alright.

Context

Kay, Sarah. "When Love Arrives"

Project By: Mikhaela Brianna Velasquez
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